Review of The Five Obstructions (2003) by Neum D — 03 Mar 2005
*strums guitar*.
A mole has burrowed into my lungs, you see.
He laughs in cough and speaks in wheeze.
He claws out my throat and rations my air.
This troublesome mole isn't being very fair.
[i]dooo dododooo dododooooot[/i].
A cloud has burrowed into my head, you see.
I wobble when it dances and echo when it sings.
It blocks my thought and puts walls in my mind.
This troublesome cloud isn't being very kind.
[i]dooo dododooo dododooooot[/i].
A pirate has burrowed into my nose, you see.
He digs for gold boulders so carelessly.
He arr's and he yarr's in my snores at night.
This troublesome pirate isn't being very right.
[i]dooo dododooo dododooooot[/i].
[i]dooo dododooo dododooooot[/i].
[i]doot.
[/i]*sleeps*.
This review of The Five Obstructions (2003) was written by Neum D on 03 Mar 2005.
The Five Obstructions has generally received very positive reviews.
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