Review of ATM (2012) by Abdullah A — 08 Aug 2012

Decent, believable interactions and dialogue for the first act, up until the ATM when the characters become victims to poor character development and follow-through. Even the antagonist is subjected to this oversight.

Too much is left to random chance to be planned by the antagonist, and the protagonists 'forget' essential actions they have been doing in favor of remembering when the tension is right. Normally, this would be acceptable, since being at the fate of random choices is a theme, but it's turned on its head in the last 5 minutes making it a major fault.

Decent tension, though.